I am intrigued that the comments given were in the plural form. Karen didn't mark my essay alone?
"The section on Asian connectedness was very well done. We agree that Indian tradition was spectacular, you have shown that clearly. But given its greatness, would it have been possible to provide a closer study of its tremendous influence on other parts of Asia - through the exhibits? We are a bit short on the details on that point, although you made a valid observation there. Do you agree with the museum's portrayal of the Asia story and Singapore's role? Are there other points of view that should be considered?"
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